Rough Cut : Bound, To-Get-Her (Together)

This is the rough cut of our opening sequence, the effects, soundtrack and transitions did not translate to the youtube video

Rough Cut - Audience Feedback

This week in our Media lesson, each group had to show their opening sequence to our peers to receieve constructive feedback on how we all can better our openings. Due to the fact that I and 2 other memebers of our group had to go to an English residential and leave one member to try and finish our rough cut, we werent able to have all of the required things like a title sequence or credits in the opening. This was the feedback we recieved :

- To make sure we have titles and credits that relate to our opening and ones which echoe those of a thriller genre


 - To ensure that in the fighting scenes, Tatiana makes more of a struggle and actually sounds like she's getting bullied

- To improve focus in the POV shot of Tatiana's arm with the scratches and bruises










- To improve the tracking shot of Mr Gibbs walking down the corridor because the camera was a bit shaky








-To also improve the shots of Tatiana in the drama room as the shot is a bit grainy due to the inbuilt lighting of the drama room that we used






-And to finally import the missing shots that we need in our opening scene